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1s/ Task: Introduce yourself
She is married and has two children’s Leo (two years old) and Hannah (four years old).
I went for 4 years in Fladnitz to elementary school.
…running in the nature.
Also I go in the stadium to look Sk Sturm matches.
This was a little information from my life.
I live in Bruck an der Großglocknerstraße, Salzburg in a little nice house.
My father work on a Farm with 30 dairy cows
My family have 2 cats, 1 dog and 5 chickens. In the Vocational School for domestic sings and agriculture in Bruck, because it is a board school.
I have one brother. He is 26 years old and he work on a farm with 100 mother cows.
I was very active in the by the young Breeds from the horses and cows.
By the breeds club we have a lot of advanced training.
My hobbies are horse riding, skiing, and swimming and meet my friends. In the winter we drive with the horses carriages with tourists.
I came from Ardning this is near Liezen.
My older sister Roswitha is 26 years old and she work as a secretary for the Maschinenring Liezen.
She taught math, physical, chemistry and art.
It was very funny there.
And then I went to Radstadt to make my practical finished.
She like it to be there, because she could go swimming and reading all her books she has.
His other hobby is to sailing with his boat on the Bodensee.
I like it a lot to be there and to help my uncle, if he should have many work to do.
My older and where I live you know now, if you read the sentences above correctly.
We have to look at 200 cattles and calfs.
The most badest thing was we didn’t have any electricity, any water in our five houses we have to live in and we only had a path to traveling around the valley – no streets.
Bevor I went to Raumberg I was in Grottenhof-Hart
He is sweetly boy.
We have za. 30 000 chicken at home but sometimes more
Also we have a small winegarden and than we can make our housewine or grape juice.
Everyday at 6 o`clock I look “Anna und die Liebe”, it`s one of my favourit TV film, but I know the real world is not so.
At the weekend afternoon I went to our disco “KW” there I meet all my friends and than we make party and dance a lot.
In the holidays I was everyday riding by my best friends.
One week in my holidays I drive to Wörschachwald.
In the winter we go skiing to Tauplitz and in the sommer we go swimming to the Spechtensee and sometimes we walking in the mountain for example Grimming.
My hobbies are hiking, be in the nature, reading books, skiing.
Go skiing is my most lovely hobby because I am a skiinstrucor.
Unfortunately we haven't a farm at home.
But in the summer my family is on a farm in the mountains, wich we have in rent.
Sometimes our family stay in the winterholidays in Ebnit.
I like this house very much because it's so near the nature and it's a privat place without the much traffic whos in the city.
The region was callt “Bucklige Welt”, and so there were a lot of hills.
We have a football place, 3 tennis cords and a beach-volleyball-place.
The wonderful woods and the view make Hochneukirchen to ah beautiful place for hiking, Nordic walking and jogging.
We also have ah way-net for mountain-biking there you can choose different difficult routes.
We have some pets one cat, one bird, one turtle, and about 5 sheep’s.
I was a very interest on the nature and so I love do be outside under fresh air.
My hobbies are playing volleyball, playing tennis, cycling, go out at weekends, cooking, fishing, hunting and so on ... I was a very interest on the nature and so I love do be outside under fresh air.
On every second week, when I was at home I spent normally the hole time with my girlfriend. We often go do parties, cinema and restaurants.
Now you have ah little information about me and my live when you like do know more about me, so ask me, please.
I was born in St.Johann iT and I also go there to the secondary modern school.
After the secondary modern school I’ve visited the LLA Weitau in St.Johann.
I go to raumberg because I think it is a good school and my teachers, friends and family said that I’m not so silly and I think that there is enough time to work in my life.
Sometimes we feed a pig for us self.
There are many activities we do under the year.
By our farm there are 14 ha grassland, 24ha mountain pasture and 60 ha forest.
We’re also a very musical family. Six of our seven Childs are members of the BMK Ellmau.
I hope you get a little insight in my live at the “Oberbiedringhof” and I hope I have informed you the best I can.
was born on the 11th of august 1992, in Oberwart.
My hobbies are the fire brigade “Reitnerberg”, playing soccer, spend time with my friends and going out at the weekends.
I was born on the 21st of august 1992 in Rottenmann, and now i live in Altirdning.
Usually before I’ve visited the ground school in Ellmau.
After elementary school and secondary modern school I went to the agriculture school in Gröbming, that is near Schladming about for three years.
In my holydays I visitetd a forestry course at the forestry school in Pichl about for five weeks.
Now I visit the agricultural school HBLFA Raumberg- Gumpenstein about for three years.
When i have finished this school I want to work in the branch agriculture.
she works as a ski instructor in the upper ennsvalley.
This was an information about of me and I hope that it was interesting for you.
First I go to the kindergarten in our village and than in the primary school and secondary school in Obdach.
By the huts the guest are have also a fish pond and for the physical well being a sauna.
Every weekend I meet my friend for some drinks in a local in Obdach.
My brother Roland meets the secondary school in St. Stefan, and my sister Irina is 14 years old and meets the Bakip Judenburg.
After Kobenz, I worked for 4 months at home, because we built a new stable for our cattle. At the end of October we want to move into it, with all our cattles.
After that years we moved to our fathers home, in the nice venue called Matrei in Easttyrol.
listening music, watch movies, playing computergames, go out with my friends, fishing,
go tot he cinema, drink beer with my friends, i love to drive with my car and with my motorbike and i also like to travel with my family and with my friends. KISS
When i´m finished with Raumberg i want to study Alternativ Energy Technik or i want to become an Doctor of Pathology
My sister is 15 Years old and visit a grammar school in Vienna.
I also make every nonsense with a rope on a tree, like to build a flying fox or to make a rope bridge.
Monday, 18 October 2010
Saturday, 9 October 2010
1a
Do the job of your teacher!!!
Try to correct the sentences – make them “sound” better!
Could you even find better expressions?
1a/ Task: Introduce yourself
Then I was visiting the Hauptschule Bad Aussee from 2006-2010.
I live with my parents and my two younger brothers Tobias who is twelve and Sebastian who is ten on a little farm in Oppenberg, that is a very small village near Rottenmann.
I was very sad about that, because it was the animal I loved from all animals on the earth most.
For a long time I have taken lessons for horse-riding at Pichlarn but now I haven’t got enough time for this hobby.
My family and me live in a beautiful house
In school I prefer English and Sports. I'm not so good in Maths.
I think I’m a very friendly and nice person, who always goes with a smile on the face through the world.
On our farm we’ve got about 70 cattles, 2 pigs, 15 chicken, and 4 cats. I’m living in the middle of hills, woods, and meadows, and I like it very much, but otherwise is also wanna live at the sea, because the weather is nearly always nice there.
He also has fields about 15 hectares and a small forest with 5 hectares.
When the weather isn’t fine I play mostly on my accordion.
because it’s a good school and am convenient for me.
On weekends I often help my father by the farm work.
I have blond hairs and blue eyes.
I have one sister, she is ten years old and goes in the first class of gym.
Three friends from me who also have gone to the Hauptschule also go in Raumberg to school. Our house is three floors high and is very beautiful. In front of there is a chestnut tree, which is as big as our house.
Also we have two tractors 14 ha of fields.
In the Hauptschool often I play table soccer with my friends.
From the window in my room I have a fantastic view at Grimming.
I enjoyed the holiday very much, but now they have an end and now I go in Raumberg to school, I really like it, but holidays are a bit better.
My mother works as a chemist by a chemist’s in Hartberg.
Also I like listening to music, go swimming or spending my spare time on the World Wide Web.
I know that I will learn very much for the life in the next five years.
I live with my family on a little farm.
The youngest from us is my little sister Bianca.
Before I went to Raumberg I go to school at the gymnasium in Köflach.
I think Raumberg was the right choose and I hope I will have my Matura in five years.
In holiday I played a lot of table tennis and football.
My mum`s job are teacher and my dad’s job are farmer.
First week my mother, my aunt, my sister, my cousin and I fly to Paris.
One of my five ants live in Canada.
In the barn are also 5 old and 9, two months young ducks.
I am playing tennis since 10 years.
I drove very often with the bike to school.
My parents names are Hildegard and Martin.
Sometimes she helps me by learning for a test
I don`t watch often TV.
Try to correct the sentences – make them “sound” better!
Could you even find better expressions?
1a/ Task: Introduce yourself
Then I was visiting the Hauptschule Bad Aussee from 2006-2010.
I live with my parents and my two younger brothers Tobias who is twelve and Sebastian who is ten on a little farm in Oppenberg, that is a very small village near Rottenmann.
I was very sad about that, because it was the animal I loved from all animals on the earth most.
For a long time I have taken lessons for horse-riding at Pichlarn but now I haven’t got enough time for this hobby.
My family and me live in a beautiful house
In school I prefer English and Sports. I'm not so good in Maths.
I think I’m a very friendly and nice person, who always goes with a smile on the face through the world.
On our farm we’ve got about 70 cattles, 2 pigs, 15 chicken, and 4 cats. I’m living in the middle of hills, woods, and meadows, and I like it very much, but otherwise is also wanna live at the sea, because the weather is nearly always nice there.
He also has fields about 15 hectares and a small forest with 5 hectares.
When the weather isn’t fine I play mostly on my accordion.
because it’s a good school and am convenient for me.
On weekends I often help my father by the farm work.
I have blond hairs and blue eyes.
I have one sister, she is ten years old and goes in the first class of gym.
Three friends from me who also have gone to the Hauptschule also go in Raumberg to school. Our house is three floors high and is very beautiful. In front of there is a chestnut tree, which is as big as our house.
Also we have two tractors 14 ha of fields.
In the Hauptschool often I play table soccer with my friends.
From the window in my room I have a fantastic view at Grimming.
I enjoyed the holiday very much, but now they have an end and now I go in Raumberg to school, I really like it, but holidays are a bit better.
My mother works as a chemist by a chemist’s in Hartberg.
Also I like listening to music, go swimming or spending my spare time on the World Wide Web.
I know that I will learn very much for the life in the next five years.
I live with my family on a little farm.
The youngest from us is my little sister Bianca.
Before I went to Raumberg I go to school at the gymnasium in Köflach.
I think Raumberg was the right choose and I hope I will have my Matura in five years.
In holiday I played a lot of table tennis and football.
My mum`s job are teacher and my dad’s job are farmer.
First week my mother, my aunt, my sister, my cousin and I fly to Paris.
One of my five ants live in Canada.
In the barn are also 5 old and 9, two months young ducks.
I am playing tennis since 10 years.
I drove very often with the bike to school.
My parents names are Hildegard and Martin.
Sometimes she helps me by learning for a test
I don`t watch often TV.
Friday, 13 November 2009
Right or Wrong 3b Drugs 13.1109
Right or Wrong 3b Drugs 13. 11. 09
So it would be better, if drug dependant get not in a jail but have medical and psychological care against this disease
Because if this would be reality, more people would take drugs as before.
And that renews the question, why the government is not able to legalize the drugs.
This article should give some ideas to solve the troubles.
Some people believe that it will be better, if drugs would be legal.
The people would have always when they use drugs lot of fun and entertainment
One reason why the government maybe will do this is to release drug dealers out of the overcrowded jails, to economize money, or to soften bloodthirsty gangs, nobody knows it!
Today many are unhappy with their life.
All addicts had to visit these aid agencies and make therapies and sessions until they could live without drugs. I think this is a much better way than go to prison.
The government in the US says that drugs are horrible for the humans.
Some people said also that drugs are not criminal.
I can imagine that very much people are gonna die, because they can legally take drugs till they are dead.
It means that there are always conflicts with people who deal with drugs and people who use illegal drugs- when drugs where legal, this problem was disappeared.
But in the majority of cases they feel when the drug effect is going down, so they shoot drugs again.
The bloodthirsty gang wars will reduces rapidly. Because when the addicts can buy the drugs legal and they could be safety that the drugs in the pharmacy are 100 per cent clean.
I think that these politicians don’t do something good for the general public when they legalized drugs.
For some people it is terrible that drugs are legalized,
So nobody will be able to control the drug taking
Many think that legalizing the drugs is good because the problem with the dealers and illegal taking of drugs would disappear.
I think these problems get higher and higher,
When we remember the law from 1914- 1988 in the USA, at this 74 years alcohol was forbid for everybody.
All hope if drugs are legalized many problems solve from even.
Drugs are very dangerous they made us addicted and change our personality.
Alcohol is a danger if we excessive use it,
Many people think it´s such a joke that some politician wants to legalize drugs
They say if there are fewer dealers the prison is not so full of dealers who only deals with soft drugs.
One reason why politicans maybe will do this is to release drug dealers out of the overcrowded jails, to economize money, or to soften bloodthirsty gangs, nobody knows it!
Then the police are overwhelmed and need more officers. At least the government must spend the money at additionally personal what they earned with the drug tax.
But is would drugs really be “the problem” in a modern world?
And another big problem is the infection of bad afflictions. About the injection these afflictions can infect the other pupils.
In our culture alcohol is a part of it. It’s not only to celebrate some things and binge drinking.
When you drive to Graz in the city park there are the dealers and you can get every drug what you want.
But when you need it then it is probably.
One of these advantages is that the number of drug dealer became lesser and lesser and they can’t sell drugs which are racked with dangerous substances.
At the beginning her parents’ don’t know it, but later they influenced to make a deprivation.
This weard thoughts are provided by the people who think that the drug wars which are since 1914 were sensless.
They also think that it would be better if there would be no drugs but they accept that this is hardly possible and that there is more peace this way.
Because they have such a high dependency.
There will be more accidents then jet because the people are all under anesthetic.
that they can hurt their body’s.
In these text they also see the side of make money with selling drugs to the public.
Know I will bring you my opinion nearer
If they legalize drugs in America, it will get a big chaos The people witch was against this idea only want a dope-free-nation.
In my view drugs should be illegal, because of the high risk to get depended on.
In the most times they were really dangerous for the body.
The text „Thinking the unthinkable“, handles the topic Legalize drugs
For some politicians the best way to curtail drugs is,
So it would be better, if drug dependant get not in a jail but have medical and psychological care against this disease
Because if this would be reality, more people would take drugs as before.
And that renews the question, why the government is not able to legalize the drugs.
This article should give some ideas to solve the troubles.
Some people believe that it will be better, if drugs would be legal.
The people would have always when they use drugs lot of fun and entertainment
One reason why the government maybe will do this is to release drug dealers out of the overcrowded jails, to economize money, or to soften bloodthirsty gangs, nobody knows it!
Today many are unhappy with their life.
All addicts had to visit these aid agencies and make therapies and sessions until they could live without drugs. I think this is a much better way than go to prison.
The government in the US says that drugs are horrible for the humans.
Some people said also that drugs are not criminal.
I can imagine that very much people are gonna die, because they can legally take drugs till they are dead.
It means that there are always conflicts with people who deal with drugs and people who use illegal drugs- when drugs where legal, this problem was disappeared.
But in the majority of cases they feel when the drug effect is going down, so they shoot drugs again.
The bloodthirsty gang wars will reduces rapidly. Because when the addicts can buy the drugs legal and they could be safety that the drugs in the pharmacy are 100 per cent clean.
I think that these politicians don’t do something good for the general public when they legalized drugs.
For some people it is terrible that drugs are legalized,
So nobody will be able to control the drug taking
Many think that legalizing the drugs is good because the problem with the dealers and illegal taking of drugs would disappear.
I think these problems get higher and higher,
When we remember the law from 1914- 1988 in the USA, at this 74 years alcohol was forbid for everybody.
All hope if drugs are legalized many problems solve from even.
Drugs are very dangerous they made us addicted and change our personality.
Alcohol is a danger if we excessive use it,
Many people think it´s such a joke that some politician wants to legalize drugs
They say if there are fewer dealers the prison is not so full of dealers who only deals with soft drugs.
One reason why politicans maybe will do this is to release drug dealers out of the overcrowded jails, to economize money, or to soften bloodthirsty gangs, nobody knows it!
Then the police are overwhelmed and need more officers. At least the government must spend the money at additionally personal what they earned with the drug tax.
But is would drugs really be “the problem” in a modern world?
And another big problem is the infection of bad afflictions. About the injection these afflictions can infect the other pupils.
In our culture alcohol is a part of it. It’s not only to celebrate some things and binge drinking.
When you drive to Graz in the city park there are the dealers and you can get every drug what you want.
But when you need it then it is probably.
One of these advantages is that the number of drug dealer became lesser and lesser and they can’t sell drugs which are racked with dangerous substances.
At the beginning her parents’ don’t know it, but later they influenced to make a deprivation.
This weard thoughts are provided by the people who think that the drug wars which are since 1914 were sensless.
They also think that it would be better if there would be no drugs but they accept that this is hardly possible and that there is more peace this way.
Because they have such a high dependency.
There will be more accidents then jet because the people are all under anesthetic.
that they can hurt their body’s.
In these text they also see the side of make money with selling drugs to the public.
Know I will bring you my opinion nearer
If they legalize drugs in America, it will get a big chaos The people witch was against this idea only want a dope-free-nation.
In my view drugs should be illegal, because of the high risk to get depended on.
In the most times they were really dangerous for the body.
The text „Thinking the unthinkable“, handles the topic Legalize drugs
For some politicians the best way to curtail drugs is,
Sunday, 8 November 2009
Right or wrong 5b 081109
The birth of an artist means in some way that Jim´s dreams come true someday, but not yet.
You can see the terrible streets of gangs, drugs, crime, where the kids have no certainly future.
Furthermore the after- effects and withdrawal symptoms of drugs is very good shown, so you can see how terrible and brutally it is if a guy is drug addicted.
Those children believe that it’s a normal thing when someone starts to smoke with 11, drinking beer heavily or even taking drugs like cocaine and some other deadly stuff.
No one wants to become an artist by this cruel way.
One fried of them dies in a very young age by the implication of leukaemia.
It maybe could help to not go the same way yourself.
I think it means the unpredictable things who could happen.
It´s easier to fall deep before to get somebody popular.
The character Jim is made for Leonardo DiCaprio.
A better example is the movie “Wir Kinder vom Bahnhof Zoo“ to scare teenagers.
I don´t think so that a film is quilty for running amok.
Children who live in a word where nobody is there to learn them behaviour, it will be hard for them to get a straight person.
A stricter law – stricter punishment
in a short space of time.
Jim and a friend of him quit school and they become masters of survive.
The police should more control in discos or on the road.
The action of this film does never lose because Jim Carroll comes from one disaster into another disaster.
then they are possible to running amok.
Jim Carroll gets help and will become famous with his poems.
Finally he went back on the right way.
He has no money for his drugs and so he prostitude himself for 35 $.
At first he had played every day basketball and had much fun with his friends but in one day he began to take drugs.
I think this film is very brutally but it is a true story and so we see that this was real.
It depends on what they feel and what future they have in life but not on if there are some people killed in a film.
But it also shows us that we can become immune of drugs.
The action of this film does never lose because Jim Carroll comes from one disaster into another disaster.
There are a great number of brutal films or video games, were people are killed in, but everybody watches these movies. Therefore more people would run amok, but it’s not so.
These doings are carefully planned, but the deliberations are rash decision.
“The death of the innocence” means the part of the movie in which Jim Carroll acquainted what happened when somebody is taken drugs.
In his book, Jim Carroll wanted to show the reader, how near success and decline are together. Better close!!
You can see the terrible streets of gangs, drugs, crime, where the kids have no certainly future.
Furthermore the after- effects and withdrawal symptoms of drugs is very good shown, so you can see how terrible and brutally it is if a guy is drug addicted.
Those children believe that it’s a normal thing when someone starts to smoke with 11, drinking beer heavily or even taking drugs like cocaine and some other deadly stuff.
No one wants to become an artist by this cruel way.
One fried of them dies in a very young age by the implication of leukaemia.
It maybe could help to not go the same way yourself.
I think it means the unpredictable things who could happen.
It´s easier to fall deep before to get somebody popular.
The character Jim is made for Leonardo DiCaprio.
A better example is the movie “Wir Kinder vom Bahnhof Zoo“ to scare teenagers.
I don´t think so that a film is quilty for running amok.
Children who live in a word where nobody is there to learn them behaviour, it will be hard for them to get a straight person.
A stricter law – stricter punishment
in a short space of time.
Jim and a friend of him quit school and they become masters of survive.
The police should more control in discos or on the road.
The action of this film does never lose because Jim Carroll comes from one disaster into another disaster.
then they are possible to running amok.
Jim Carroll gets help and will become famous with his poems.
Finally he went back on the right way.
He has no money for his drugs and so he prostitude himself for 35 $.
At first he had played every day basketball and had much fun with his friends but in one day he began to take drugs.
I think this film is very brutally but it is a true story and so we see that this was real.
It depends on what they feel and what future they have in life but not on if there are some people killed in a film.
But it also shows us that we can become immune of drugs.
The action of this film does never lose because Jim Carroll comes from one disaster into another disaster.
There are a great number of brutal films or video games, were people are killed in, but everybody watches these movies. Therefore more people would run amok, but it’s not so.
These doings are carefully planned, but the deliberations are rash decision.
“The death of the innocence” means the part of the movie in which Jim Carroll acquainted what happened when somebody is taken drugs.
In his book, Jim Carroll wanted to show the reader, how near success and decline are together. Better close!!
Monday, 2 November 2009
Right or wrong 2s 1.11.09
There were many things I have done but not really exiting.
It was already not so good, because the wheather was very fine, and I had to sit in the classroom. After the Drivers License I was at home and worked in agriculture and in the house.
I like learning and attending school and my brain was not working enough in holidays.
I had very much fun in my holiday.
There I had a little accident. I had to extinguish a fat brand.
It was ever very hot in the stable. I also often went rake.
One week I were on the albp because I must cut down the trees around our alpin cabine.
And I also have done my car driver.
IN the last weekend I were hiking on our house mountain with my family. At the last day of my holidays I were shopping.
The next day wasn’t so good because we had to do the cleaning and this was quite strong!
Sometime it was very busy but I liked my work very much and the most time it was a lot of fun
In the H2O Therme there is especialy a pool- bar.It was a relaxing week.
Normally my horse is in the near of graz at a forcast.
Well I also studied for my examination, but as it turned out too few.
The work was most the time the same. In the morning at five o clock I stand up and shouted “Hou,hou,hoouuu…..” to let in the 28 cows on our alpine pasture. Than I had to milk 14 brown swiss cows and washed the milking machinery.
If the weather was not stabile I did the stable work and other works like : repair the machinery, grind the knifes or cut weed, little trees and shrubs.
At two Sundays at begin September I carried a female and one male calf from the mountain pasture into the stable and provided them and also their mothers, and after I had done this, my friend “Andi” and I had had two specially hiking- climbing tours.
It was phenomenal to saw some friends after the “long” holidays.
I also had to plane the fertilization plan.
All in all the holidays were very fun and I could enjoy them a little bit.
The bad side at the school beginning is that I have to drive to school and home every week and that’s really expensive, because of the petrol.
The following two weeks I doesn´t do anything.
One time in summer holidays it had rained so much that the stream by side our house grows dangerous and from one to another second the water streams into our garage and boiler room,
So I had only some opportunities to practise English in holidays.
On the on hand I am very happy when the school started because I must work hard at home and on a building site and on other hand the holiday was too shortly.
As a Green keeper I often mow the grassland and sometimes I pour the flowers.
The honey site of the holidays I often went with my friends in disco´s and pubs.
It was Saturday. I would drive with my car to my grandfather and we would go hunt. Two hours before it rains very heavy and the street was very glibber. I drove with my car over the Rechberg and I lost the control from my car and I have an accident.
I had much work and the time was passing by very fast.
I like learning and attending school and my brain was not working enough in holidays.
In August I was with my boyfriend on holidays in the east of Tyrol for four days.
It’s really cool to be the own boss.
There I also earned money and I also learnt a much how to work in such kitchens.
After these nine weeks I looked forward to come back to Raumberg and I was happy that school has started again.
In the middle of August I was operated by my right knee, because I hurt it by a football match in the year 2006.
I had some heights and depths.
In this summer we begin to build the party barn for our tournaments.
The two weeks where too short and so I have to fly home.
When I arrived at home I went to Podersdorf am See, because I partake on the Podersdorfer triathlon.
Stick to the same TENSE!!!!!
The main actor is Jim Carrol, played from Leonardo DiCaprio.
Jim has no father. When he grows up he began to smoke with his friends.
I also think that this film hasn´t a positive effect to run amok.
First I want to say that this is a very dramatic and impressive movie which base on the true life of Jim Carroll.
The next shocking thing was as Jim prostitute his self to get more drugs.
In my opinion the registered Scott Kalvert, wants to show what happens when a young handsome smart boy takes drugs and throw his live away.
With the death of the innocence he maybe wants to say, that a lot of innocence people die of taking and selling drugs.
I think that he write this play to care some pupils from the same mistake what he have made.
think that Jim Carroll was only able to write this “memories”, while he made such cruel experiences.
In my opinion the law should make it more difficult to become drugs!
What I want to say is that these games and these movies aren’t the primarily reason that young people run amok!The gets mobbed and discriminated. In these games they can live their aggressiveness out!
I think there are many important actions in the movie which you don’t observe at the first time when you watch the movie only once.
But sometimes it is difficult to understand and to continue this movie.
Especially I think that this movie means that they only can exist when they only take care about their own.
My opinion about that movie is, that it is a good way to prevent young people from entering the wrong turn.
To have right friends is very important, because when teenagers have friends witch take drugs they sometimes also start with taking them.
Especially I think that this movie means that they only can exist when they only take care about their own.
Leonardo DiCaprio played the roll of Jim Carol very good and we can learn much about this movie.
When they need drugs and had no money they sold the body this is the deep point in some cases.
They will support you when you do something.
If Leo DiCaprio would be a good boy, he would never be such a famous basketball player. But it isn´t good that he started to take drugs, because he became addicted.
At some scene they spoke too fast and I understand the actors very hard.
If you drink sometimes alcohol this is not a problem but you need more and more drugs and alcohol you turn into a junky and you were addicted.
have to say that is also a good thing how to scare pupils to run amok. In the movie every person saw which consequences there are when you take drugs and drink too much alcohol. You destroy your live. You destroy yourself
The scene in which Jim wanted to stop doing drugs was so impressive.
Jim is a exception. I think the fewest oft drug addicted people get out of this scene and can start a normal live.
And often many people arrested also when they were innocent.
He also means his deeps and the highs - simply the whole tender.
Movies like this couldn’t make young people to run amok. I think so.
This film acts from a live change of an teenager and his fall into a cruel situation the drug vicious circle.
He plays very good basketball and is with four friends of his class in a famous top basketball team.
During the matches one of the boys go always in the locker room and steel there the clocks and wallets of opposes.
They went together out to have fun and a nice day but final in a peepshow the friend gets angry and wanted to go back to hospital, maybe he knows that he never become healthy and will die soon.
The best way to prevent our youth of taking drugs and running amok is an good association, good friens and one believe.
People can become artists through different ways.
In my opinion the phrase: ,,The true story of the death of innocence and the birth of an artist”, means that everyone of us has to grow up, someones grow up faster than others not.
The puberty can be very intensive, as we can see in the film, and it also can be harmless.
This movie shows us how terrible life can be and in wich big problems you can come.
In my view this film can not be responsible for any amok runnings. To say that only this film is responsible for an amok run is nonsense because there must be many other reasons to do such horrible things.
First I want to say that it is a good film which shows the life of american boys whos quitting the school.
In my opinion if the boy didn´t went to prison, and if he didn´t commit crimes he wouldn´t become an artist.
Sometimes they become murderer.
I can´t imagine that any people will commit crime for a while after seeing that film. In my view the film let ones to think about what all can happen if they do something similar.
In my view ones would be shocked after seeing that film, but not to get aggressive.
In the worst way you going to take drugs or do a crime.
So innocence pupil had to die that everybody know´s who Jim Carroll is. And a new “artist” called Jim Carroll is born.
You destroy your live. You destroy yourself.
There were many things I have done but not really exiting.
It was already not so good, because the wheather was very fine, and I had to sit in the classroom. After the Drivers License I was at home and worked in agriculture and in the house.
I like learning and attending school and my brain was not working enough in holidays.
I had very much fun in my holiday.
There I had a little accident. I had to extinguish a fat brand.
It was ever very hot in the stable. I also often went rake.
One week I were on the albp because I must cut down the trees around our alpin cabine.
And I also have done my car driver.
IN the last weekend I were hiking on our house mountain with my family. At the last day of my holidays I were shopping.
The next day wasn’t so good because we had to do the cleaning and this was quite strong!
Sometime it was very busy but I liked my work very much and the most time it was a lot of fun
In the H2O Therme there is especialy a pool- bar.It was a relaxing week.
Normally my horse is in the near of graz at a forcast.
Well I also studied for my examination, but as it turned out too few.
The work was most the time the same. In the morning at five o clock I stand up and shouted “Hou,hou,hoouuu…..” to let in the 28 cows on our alpine pasture. Than I had to milk 14 brown swiss cows and washed the milking machinery.
If the weather was not stabile I did the stable work and other works like : repair the machinery, grind the knifes or cut weed, little trees and shrubs.
At two Sundays at begin September I carried a female and one male calf from the mountain pasture into the stable and provided them and also their mothers, and after I had done this, my friend “Andi” and I had had two specially hiking- climbing tours.
It was phenomenal to saw some friends after the “long” holidays.
I also had to plane the fertilization plan.
All in all the holidays were very fun and I could enjoy them a little bit.
The bad side at the school beginning is that I have to drive to school and home every week and that’s really expensive, because of the petrol.
The following two weeks I doesn´t do anything.
One time in summer holidays it had rained so much that the stream by side our house grows dangerous and from one to another second the water streams into our garage and boiler room,
So I had only some opportunities to practise English in holidays.
On the on hand I am very happy when the school started because I must work hard at home and on a building site and on other hand the holiday was too shortly.
As a Green keeper I often mow the grassland and sometimes I pour the flowers.
The honey site of the holidays I often went with my friends in disco´s and pubs.
It was Saturday. I would drive with my car to my grandfather and we would go hunt. Two hours before it rains very heavy and the street was very glibber. I drove with my car over the Rechberg and I lost the control from my car and I have an accident.
I had much work and the time was passing by very fast.
I like learning and attending school and my brain was not working enough in holidays.
In August I was with my boyfriend on holidays in the east of Tyrol for four days.
It’s really cool to be the own boss.
There I also earned money and I also learnt a much how to work in such kitchens.
After these nine weeks I looked forward to come back to Raumberg and I was happy that school has started again.
In the middle of August I was operated by my right knee, because I hurt it by a football match in the year 2006.
I had some heights and depths.
In this summer we begin to build the party barn for our tournaments.
The two weeks where too short and so I have to fly home.
When I arrived at home I went to Podersdorf am See, because I partake on the Podersdorfer triathlon.
Stick to the same TENSE!!!!!
The main actor is Jim Carrol, played from Leonardo DiCaprio.
Jim has no father. When he grows up he began to smoke with his friends.
I also think that this film hasn´t a positive effect to run amok.
First I want to say that this is a very dramatic and impressive movie which base on the true life of Jim Carroll.
The next shocking thing was as Jim prostitute his self to get more drugs.
In my opinion the registered Scott Kalvert, wants to show what happens when a young handsome smart boy takes drugs and throw his live away.
With the death of the innocence he maybe wants to say, that a lot of innocence people die of taking and selling drugs.
I think that he write this play to care some pupils from the same mistake what he have made.
think that Jim Carroll was only able to write this “memories”, while he made such cruel experiences.
In my opinion the law should make it more difficult to become drugs!
What I want to say is that these games and these movies aren’t the primarily reason that young people run amok!The gets mobbed and discriminated. In these games they can live their aggressiveness out!
I think there are many important actions in the movie which you don’t observe at the first time when you watch the movie only once.
But sometimes it is difficult to understand and to continue this movie.
Especially I think that this movie means that they only can exist when they only take care about their own.
My opinion about that movie is, that it is a good way to prevent young people from entering the wrong turn.
To have right friends is very important, because when teenagers have friends witch take drugs they sometimes also start with taking them.
Especially I think that this movie means that they only can exist when they only take care about their own.
Leonardo DiCaprio played the roll of Jim Carol very good and we can learn much about this movie.
When they need drugs and had no money they sold the body this is the deep point in some cases.
They will support you when you do something.
If Leo DiCaprio would be a good boy, he would never be such a famous basketball player. But it isn´t good that he started to take drugs, because he became addicted.
At some scene they spoke too fast and I understand the actors very hard.
If you drink sometimes alcohol this is not a problem but you need more and more drugs and alcohol you turn into a junky and you were addicted.
have to say that is also a good thing how to scare pupils to run amok. In the movie every person saw which consequences there are when you take drugs and drink too much alcohol. You destroy your live. You destroy yourself
The scene in which Jim wanted to stop doing drugs was so impressive.
Jim is a exception. I think the fewest oft drug addicted people get out of this scene and can start a normal live.
And often many people arrested also when they were innocent.
He also means his deeps and the highs - simply the whole tender.
Movies like this couldn’t make young people to run amok. I think so.
This film acts from a live change of an teenager and his fall into a cruel situation the drug vicious circle.
He plays very good basketball and is with four friends of his class in a famous top basketball team.
During the matches one of the boys go always in the locker room and steel there the clocks and wallets of opposes.
They went together out to have fun and a nice day but final in a peepshow the friend gets angry and wanted to go back to hospital, maybe he knows that he never become healthy and will die soon.
The best way to prevent our youth of taking drugs and running amok is an good association, good friens and one believe.
People can become artists through different ways.
In my opinion the phrase: ,,The true story of the death of innocence and the birth of an artist”, means that everyone of us has to grow up, someones grow up faster than others not.
The puberty can be very intensive, as we can see in the film, and it also can be harmless.
This movie shows us how terrible life can be and in wich big problems you can come.
In my view this film can not be responsible for any amok runnings. To say that only this film is responsible for an amok run is nonsense because there must be many other reasons to do such horrible things.
First I want to say that it is a good film which shows the life of american boys whos quitting the school.
In my opinion if the boy didn´t went to prison, and if he didn´t commit crimes he wouldn´t become an artist.
Sometimes they become murderer.
I can´t imagine that any people will commit crime for a while after seeing that film. In my view the film let ones to think about what all can happen if they do something similar.
In my view ones would be shocked after seeing that film, but not to get aggressive.
In the worst way you going to take drugs or do a crime.
So innocence pupil had to die that everybody know´s who Jim Carroll is. And a new “artist” called Jim Carroll is born.
You destroy your live. You destroy yourself.
Right or wrong 5a / Basketball Diaries
It means that a man lost his innocence through drugs and he made a lot of stupid things.
And he began to realize that it is better to change the life and so Jim Carroll starts to write books and poets.
The next point I would like to make is that we see, through the addict of drugs, persons have other feelings and start to make stupid things, for example stealing money or smoking.
I think that this movie influenzas people negative, who have the same problems as Jim Carroll.
Then they have bad feelings and a movie like basketball diaries animates persons to do the same like in the film, e.g. running amok.
The parents should educate their children strict, but not too strict.
In our English lessons we watched the movie “The Basketball Diaries” I think it shows, in a dramatically but real way, what it means to be addictive to drugs.
It shows the unprotected and free fall of a young man from a pretty good college student to a poor, homeless and prosecuting drug addicted fellow.
I think this sentence is what describes the whole film the best way.
A few years ago a boy ran amok with the style that is shown in this movie.
If somebody has a full planned day he won’t be very interested of getting himself down through some pills.
The birth of an artist means, that he also began to write poems and that he knows what he can effect by taking drugs.
Sometimes, the accent of the actors is hard to understand, but if you listen careful, you would understand the most part.
All in all it is better when this film is only shown to the older pupils, because there are some scenes which should not shown people under 16 years.
It is a really good movie to prevent young people, because it is a really story.
This sentence means that many people lost their innocence, why they take drugs or they run amok.
Many people recognize that drugs are very harmful for their body.
A lot of famous movie stars or writer make a book of their horrible life and tell the people the negative site of drugs.
A great example is Robbie Williams, he stopped his career because he need drugs all day.
The movie illustrates a young boy he was a very good sportsman and his horrible future.
Smoking or drinking alcohol is a step under the drugs.
I think this movie not influenzas young people to run amok.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The young children have often other reasons for example bad marks at school, no home or a lot of other things.
The government should introduce stranger punishments for young aggressive children.
I really think that this film could prevent young people from taking drugs, except you are a little bit crazy and you think that it’s cool when you are high and no more recognizing what happens all around you.
But when you see just the end of the film, you never mind that the man who is sitting on a stage, the light shines just on him, and he’s reading a book- a special book.
If he would have not taken drugs, he would have never written his diary that way.
Maybe they can solve their problems that way, least with themselves.
Hopefully the situation is getting better and everybody learns to estimate life.
The film shows the dramatically way of an 16-year-old guy.
At first he was a pretty good college student than he changed to a poor, homeless, prostitution and prosecuting drug addicted fellow.
I think this sentence describe this story in the best way.
so they often want to start away from their problems with drugs or alcohol.
Michi 3.Person S!!!
Because things like that are happening every day also in Austria but with not so much force.
And that’s very sad for us because we could help these kids who came on the track.
The most fucking thing is that everyone says that they will help but when someone needs everybody shows him the cold shoulder.
It is not improbable that with of us happen the same things like these boys.
You are faster on the wrong way as on the good way.
Then they are realizing what this want to say to our community.
But for running amok it is more difficult to help but this is a thing you can’t see in the eyes, you can see it only in his soul.
and they begin to taking drugs
After this period of life they have experienced a lot and so they are often become a very well artist or writer.
This movie shows the vicious circle of drugs very good.
In this period of life often you are successful in life too.
But in the last few months of his life he experienced that he had lung cancer and this months were rally horrible. n he doesn’t get this stuff he gets withdraw symptoms.
In the one hand I think so.
In my opinion it is very difficult to help these people because often they have problems in their life since they are children.
So I think it is very hard to help these people because they have nobody to speak and often nobody want to realize it that something is wrong with this person and after an amok run it is too late…
The true story of the death of the innocence means, that Jim Carroll trashes his whole life by taking drugs and drinking too much alcohol.
I think when you will take drugs you don’t stop it through this movie.
I think in Austria it isn’t so because there the people are “saner”.
But in America I think that it can happen because there the people are more ruthless and they get faster and very easy to weapons.
I think to forbid drugs and alcohol (until 16 or 18 years) is not the whole and best solution,
I think the gun controlling law should be harder and the punishment should be harder.
Lot of artists begins to taking drugs because they are very stressed in your life and they found her solution in the drugs.
The same situation was with Jim Carroll at first he begins with taking drugs and later he begins with writing books.
This film is a very good example for kids or young people what can happen when you taking drugs.
A very big problem with drugs is the kids can lose your control or get problems with the police
At first is always ok he is in a basketball team with his friends and his family is nice and has no problems.
Suddenly he is very bad in the school and gets problems with his family the sport teacher begins with terror and so he begins with taking drugs.
So is very good when you shock young people because they see the other side of the drugs.
Do this paragraph I want to say it is better when you show it the young people what can happen as you say it is too hard for the kids.
The best solution is when you say kids what can happen. Because when you say the problems and the negative sides of drugs, so lose the teenagers the interesting about it.
It is a dramatically film about drugs and what drugs can make with people.
When he starts taking drugs, his life changed from a pretty life into a horrible life.
As he made a detoxification, his live got better and better.
Jim Carrol knew the difference between a normal life and a life with drugs as center point.
At first Jim was a good sportsman, but when he starts to take drugs he lose his friends, his mom and his home.
On the other hand it is a fail, because young people could try to take drugs.
The police should more control at night in parks and in discos.
There is one scene in the movie which shows how desperate she was. “Jim knocks at his mothers door and cries for help, for money.
The ones at the countryside were not so affected, because there were not so many dealers.
When you show this film to physic labile persons it really can be reason why they run amok.
In my opinion it is false to produce films for kids, under the 12th birthday, with wars.
To prevent young people of taking drugs is a very demanding work.
To see the life of a young man who takes drugs and all what happens to him in this time is not a film for me.
And by telling his story and preventing young people of taking drugs he became an artist and maybe even more famous than as basketball player.
The Story of the artists begins with an age of 14 years.
He started to take drugs and was dependent on it. After a time he can’t go to school, he was not allowed to go home.
Now at last, in the age of 18, he was arrested for a few months and stopped to take drugs.
In my opinion I would say that the movie is very interesting because you see the consequences if you would take drugs.
I wouldn’t say this because for some amok-disasters are brutality games responsible and not so movies. Basically you can’t say who is responsible for such terror attack.
It sounds easily, but it isn’t because some cities are to big to get control of the whole region.
But I think we can make the best out of it and we can not blame always everybody for our fate, because it is sometimes our own fault.
Maybe people are aware of the dangers drugs can harm, if they have seen this
film. But on the other side if people want to take drugs, they do…No Film can prevent from this, but you eaven know the dangers and what drugs make out of you.
also think that Leonardo di Caprio is a great artist which plays actually very very good in the film basketball diaries. (also in titanic=)). I think the rule of Jim Carroll really suits Leo and the film is fabulous.
In this movie Jim Carroll was a good basketball player in his school team but he was taking drugs and so he lost the ground under his feet.
Later he was an artist in his genre.
The movie was very great and the actors played very good.
In the beginning, it tastes good but it can quickly lead to dependence.
I don’t know if these films prevent young people to take drugs.
Yes, I thing that these films can prevent young people to run amok.
We can also restrict films or computer games with a high violent rate to people who are over 18 years.
But there is no absolutely safeness of people who have a very bad intention to run amok.
I think it means that Jim Carroll lost all his shy about the life.
He takes drugs, he lost his home, he lost his virginity, he rob a restaurant, go to the grain, and so an.
And then he find out, with the help of his neighbour hood friend, that’s there other things in life that make you happy.
I think Leonardo DiCaprio is really a good artist and without him I think the move won’t be so good.
The bad thing is that some people run amok due this film.
I must say that I don’t understand why this is happen, because when I saw this film I haven’t the feeling to kill people.
Everybody has its own opinion of a story like this and maybe it is a warning for young boys and girls
On the one hand I don’t think that a normal person runs amok when it sees this film, because there exists so many film with force and weapons in the story.
On the other hand I think this film is not the only reason for people to run amok, because some young people also have many problems in their life.
In this movie you can see it very good.
I think the movie is very good. The film is interesting, exiting and have a great action.
The movie describe us the life of many teenagers. They have false friends, they are trying drugs and then they are falling deeper and deeper.
Or they are influenced from other films or computer games.
With the time Jim needed more and more money to bought drugs and so he stole money from his mother and got more and more criminal.
His mother needs must to kick him out of the apartment because she did not known what she should do with him.
Therefore he lived in the streets of New York for some time.
Drugs are also a very big problem in our time.
But why did people take drugs?
In my opinion I think we should talk more about that thinks and we should alighted our kids as early as possible.
When people have not got a need to take drugs than the consumption is shrinking.
Another offer could be that the police control the border grimmer that not so much drugs are smuggling into the land.
But I think it’s good, because also in some cities of Austria things like that happened nearly everyday.
It is better to see such a film with seventeen or eighteen otherwise you misses the point.
Maybe such a film can influence mental unstable people a little bit to do horrible things.
The parents educated their kids very bad. Often they are bad at school.
So it is very important that every child get a good education.
You can say nearly in another world and in this world most of that people which taking drugs do many incredible things.
When you take drugs you are in a very dangerous condition. You can say nearly in another world and in this world most of that people which taking drugs do many incredible things.
This movie is very hard because it shows how it is when you get dependent of drugs.
In my opinion this film is very good, because it show us how it is when you have a problem with drugs.
In other countries like the United States of America this film could make young people to run amok because when the young people see this film they get an impression of it.
Young people often have problems in school, their friends or with their family and when they have no other ideas they take drugs, committed crimes and in very bad situations they killed themselves or other people.
Yes, it´s a really good idea to make such films or describe lives of former drug user to prevent young people from taking drugs.
It prevent young people much more from drugs than just a poster or if somebody just say “don´t take drugs”.
The reason why people run amok is because they have a lot of problem with their life in different life situations.
Maybe someone is planning to run amok and search for the way how he is doing that is influenced by such scenes, but he also will run amok without seeing such scenes when he has planned such a cruel act.
Second : the produce of drugs must be stopped and that’s the first thing what´s nearly impossible because with drugs you can make a lot money and so the drug production will never stop.
This means that a young brilliant boy who has very good chances to come in a famous basketball team leave his innocence because his best friends take drugs and he wanted to be cool so he also take drugs. And then he can’t leave it.
The police should more control at night in parks and in discos. In school nobody should be an outsider and when someone is bad in school everyone should help him.
In our English lessons we watched the movie “The Basketball Diaries”. This sentence means that many people lost their innocence, why they take drugs or they run amok.
They also commit crimes and prostitute them to get money for his drugs.
The birth of the autor means that he also take drugs but he survived the really difficult situation in his life.
The people in the cities should think more about this problem with drugs.
So I think it is very hard to help these people because they have nobody to speak and often nobody want to realize it that something is wrong with this person and after an amok run it is too late.
First he was not depanded on drugs but then he took more and more. Beside he always wrote a diary.
The scene with the amok run is not so good because in america a guy try this.
The film is also really hard and not for too young students because they often say fuck and use the new yorker slang.
In the older times young people stay at home with fourteen, in this time they go out and try everything and get everything in the cities.
The parents have to prevent them from drugs and doesn´t let them go out and show them the consequences.
The computer games are not always be the reason for amok runs.
In the school they teachers should show films and punish young people who take drugs.
Jim Carroll showed us how it is easy to take drugs and to destroy your life.
Maybe for some people is this movie a reason to run amok.
They are not so hard but these little soft drugs bring you to addict of them.
But I think it is very hard to help this people because many of them won’t to speak about their problems and won’t no help.
Basketball diaries was a very informative movie for me, because it is hard to understand the troubles of a young boy in a big city.
The artist had lost his innocense because he drunk very much and he had taken very much and differently drugs.
Sometimes the artists have to start with smoking or have to drink a lot and sometimes they have to eat a very much. Only that they get the film part and earn money.
No. I think that nobody change his mind because of a film.
Everyone have his own story and life in his own film and so everyone have do decide about the life.
In my opinion we can do nothing. When some people life in a good environment they never will do things like that. Only people in very bad perhaps will do this.
At first he takes only “soft drugs” like Alcohol and cigarettes. Than the situation become worse and he begins with “hard drugs” like Extasie or Heroin.
I think that the author of this movie would make teenager become afraid of taking drugs.
One reason is that only people who have no friends or play the whole day computer games like call of duty run amok.
When Leonardo di Carprio drink only anti alcoholic drinks and say often alcohol makes you brain death the young people will think about it and make it real.
I think that this film is a good example for a very bad life of a young man how doesn´t know something about the consequences of drugs.
But I think this is also a reason because everybody think that he´s so good and therefore he has problems with his life and so he doesn´t want to be this boy.
And one time it was to much.
Not everybody how take drugs died, but it can be when it´s too much.
Because everybody says that this is only a film and this happened nod to him because he only take some drugs and that’s no problem.
You can show consequences in the TV or the best I think can be when young peoplr how finished to take drugs talk with other young people about the problems.
In my opinion it also means to loose every respect and to kick the honour of living as a self-thinking human being into the ass.
It means that a man lost his innocence through drugs and he made a lot of stupid things.
And he began to realize that it is better to change the life and so Jim Carroll starts to write books and poets.
The next point I would like to make is that we see, through the addict of drugs, persons have other feelings and start to make stupid things, for example stealing money or smoking.
I think that this movie influenzas people negative, who have the same problems as Jim Carroll.
Then they have bad feelings and a movie like basketball diaries animates persons to do the same like in the film, e.g. running amok.
The parents should educate their children strict, but not too strict.
In our English lessons we watched the movie “The Basketball Diaries” I think it shows, in a dramatically but real way, what it means to be addictive to drugs.
It shows the unprotected and free fall of a young man from a pretty good college student to a poor, homeless and prosecuting drug addicted fellow.
I think this sentence is what describes the whole film the best way.
A few years ago a boy ran amok with the style that is shown in this movie.
If somebody has a full planned day he won’t be very interested of getting himself down through some pills.
The birth of an artist means, that he also began to write poems and that he knows what he can effect by taking drugs.
Sometimes, the accent of the actors is hard to understand, but if you listen careful, you would understand the most part.
All in all it is better when this film is only shown to the older pupils, because there are some scenes which should not shown people under 16 years.
It is a really good movie to prevent young people, because it is a really story.
This sentence means that many people lost their innocence, why they take drugs or they run amok.
Many people recognize that drugs are very harmful for their body.
A lot of famous movie stars or writer make a book of their horrible life and tell the people the negative site of drugs.
A great example is Robbie Williams, he stopped his career because he need drugs all day.
The movie illustrates a young boy he was a very good sportsman and his horrible future.
Smoking or drinking alcohol is a step under the drugs.
I think this movie not influenzas young people to run amok.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The young children have often other reasons for example bad marks at school, no home or a lot of other things.
The government should introduce stranger punishments for young aggressive children.
I really think that this film could prevent young people from taking drugs, except you are a little bit crazy and you think that it’s cool when you are high and no more recognizing what happens all around you.
But when you see just the end of the film, you never mind that the man who is sitting on a stage, the light shines just on him, and he’s reading a book- a special book.
If he would have not taken drugs, he would have never written his diary that way.
Maybe they can solve their problems that way, least with themselves.
Hopefully the situation is getting better and everybody learns to estimate life.
The film shows the dramatically way of an 16-year-old guy.
At first he was a pretty good college student than he changed to a poor, homeless, prostitution and prosecuting drug addicted fellow.
I think this sentence describe this story in the best way.
so they often want to start away from their problems with drugs or alcohol.
Michi 3.Person S!!!
Because things like that are happening every day also in Austria but with not so much force.
And that’s very sad for us because we could help these kids who came on the track.
The most fucking thing is that everyone says that they will help but when someone needs everybody shows him the cold shoulder.
It is not improbable that with of us happen the same things like these boys.
You are faster on the wrong way as on the good way.
Then they are realizing what this want to say to our community.
But for running amok it is more difficult to help but this is a thing you can’t see in the eyes, you can see it only in his soul.
and they begin to taking drugs
After this period of life they have experienced a lot and so they are often become a very well artist or writer.
This movie shows the vicious circle of drugs very good.
In this period of life often you are successful in life too.
But in the last few months of his life he experienced that he had lung cancer and this months were rally horrible. n he doesn’t get this stuff he gets withdraw symptoms.
In the one hand I think so.
In my opinion it is very difficult to help these people because often they have problems in their life since they are children.
So I think it is very hard to help these people because they have nobody to speak and often nobody want to realize it that something is wrong with this person and after an amok run it is too late…
The true story of the death of the innocence means, that Jim Carroll trashes his whole life by taking drugs and drinking too much alcohol.
I think when you will take drugs you don’t stop it through this movie.
I think in Austria it isn’t so because there the people are “saner”.
But in America I think that it can happen because there the people are more ruthless and they get faster and very easy to weapons.
I think to forbid drugs and alcohol (until 16 or 18 years) is not the whole and best solution,
I think the gun controlling law should be harder and the punishment should be harder.
Lot of artists begins to taking drugs because they are very stressed in your life and they found her solution in the drugs.
The same situation was with Jim Carroll at first he begins with taking drugs and later he begins with writing books.
This film is a very good example for kids or young people what can happen when you taking drugs.
A very big problem with drugs is the kids can lose your control or get problems with the police
At first is always ok he is in a basketball team with his friends and his family is nice and has no problems.
Suddenly he is very bad in the school and gets problems with his family the sport teacher begins with terror and so he begins with taking drugs.
So is very good when you shock young people because they see the other side of the drugs.
Do this paragraph I want to say it is better when you show it the young people what can happen as you say it is too hard for the kids.
The best solution is when you say kids what can happen. Because when you say the problems and the negative sides of drugs, so lose the teenagers the interesting about it.
It is a dramatically film about drugs and what drugs can make with people.
When he starts taking drugs, his life changed from a pretty life into a horrible life.
As he made a detoxification, his live got better and better.
Jim Carrol knew the difference between a normal life and a life with drugs as center point.
At first Jim was a good sportsman, but when he starts to take drugs he lose his friends, his mom and his home.
On the other hand it is a fail, because young people could try to take drugs.
The police should more control at night in parks and in discos.
There is one scene in the movie which shows how desperate she was. “Jim knocks at his mothers door and cries for help, for money.
The ones at the countryside were not so affected, because there were not so many dealers.
When you show this film to physic labile persons it really can be reason why they run amok.
In my opinion it is false to produce films for kids, under the 12th birthday, with wars.
To prevent young people of taking drugs is a very demanding work.
To see the life of a young man who takes drugs and all what happens to him in this time is not a film for me.
And by telling his story and preventing young people of taking drugs he became an artist and maybe even more famous than as basketball player.
The Story of the artists begins with an age of 14 years.
He started to take drugs and was dependent on it. After a time he can’t go to school, he was not allowed to go home.
Now at last, in the age of 18, he was arrested for a few months and stopped to take drugs.
In my opinion I would say that the movie is very interesting because you see the consequences if you would take drugs.
I wouldn’t say this because for some amok-disasters are brutality games responsible and not so movies. Basically you can’t say who is responsible for such terror attack.
It sounds easily, but it isn’t because some cities are to big to get control of the whole region.
But I think we can make the best out of it and we can not blame always everybody for our fate, because it is sometimes our own fault.
Maybe people are aware of the dangers drugs can harm, if they have seen this
film. But on the other side if people want to take drugs, they do…No Film can prevent from this, but you eaven know the dangers and what drugs make out of you.
also think that Leonardo di Caprio is a great artist which plays actually very very good in the film basketball diaries. (also in titanic=)). I think the rule of Jim Carroll really suits Leo and the film is fabulous.
In this movie Jim Carroll was a good basketball player in his school team but he was taking drugs and so he lost the ground under his feet.
Later he was an artist in his genre.
The movie was very great and the actors played very good.
In the beginning, it tastes good but it can quickly lead to dependence.
I don’t know if these films prevent young people to take drugs.
Yes, I thing that these films can prevent young people to run amok.
We can also restrict films or computer games with a high violent rate to people who are over 18 years.
But there is no absolutely safeness of people who have a very bad intention to run amok.
I think it means that Jim Carroll lost all his shy about the life.
He takes drugs, he lost his home, he lost his virginity, he rob a restaurant, go to the grain, and so an.
And then he find out, with the help of his neighbour hood friend, that’s there other things in life that make you happy.
I think Leonardo DiCaprio is really a good artist and without him I think the move won’t be so good.
The bad thing is that some people run amok due this film.
I must say that I don’t understand why this is happen, because when I saw this film I haven’t the feeling to kill people.
Everybody has its own opinion of a story like this and maybe it is a warning for young boys and girls
On the one hand I don’t think that a normal person runs amok when it sees this film, because there exists so many film with force and weapons in the story.
On the other hand I think this film is not the only reason for people to run amok, because some young people also have many problems in their life.
In this movie you can see it very good.
I think the movie is very good. The film is interesting, exiting and have a great action.
The movie describe us the life of many teenagers. They have false friends, they are trying drugs and then they are falling deeper and deeper.
Or they are influenced from other films or computer games.
With the time Jim needed more and more money to bought drugs and so he stole money from his mother and got more and more criminal.
His mother needs must to kick him out of the apartment because she did not known what she should do with him.
Therefore he lived in the streets of New York for some time.
Drugs are also a very big problem in our time.
But why did people take drugs?
In my opinion I think we should talk more about that thinks and we should alighted our kids as early as possible.
When people have not got a need to take drugs than the consumption is shrinking.
Another offer could be that the police control the border grimmer that not so much drugs are smuggling into the land.
But I think it’s good, because also in some cities of Austria things like that happened nearly everyday.
It is better to see such a film with seventeen or eighteen otherwise you misses the point.
Maybe such a film can influence mental unstable people a little bit to do horrible things.
The parents educated their kids very bad. Often they are bad at school.
So it is very important that every child get a good education.
You can say nearly in another world and in this world most of that people which taking drugs do many incredible things.
When you take drugs you are in a very dangerous condition. You can say nearly in another world and in this world most of that people which taking drugs do many incredible things.
This movie is very hard because it shows how it is when you get dependent of drugs.
In my opinion this film is very good, because it show us how it is when you have a problem with drugs.
In other countries like the United States of America this film could make young people to run amok because when the young people see this film they get an impression of it.
Young people often have problems in school, their friends or with their family and when they have no other ideas they take drugs, committed crimes and in very bad situations they killed themselves or other people.
Yes, it´s a really good idea to make such films or describe lives of former drug user to prevent young people from taking drugs.
It prevent young people much more from drugs than just a poster or if somebody just say “don´t take drugs”.
The reason why people run amok is because they have a lot of problem with their life in different life situations.
Maybe someone is planning to run amok and search for the way how he is doing that is influenced by such scenes, but he also will run amok without seeing such scenes when he has planned such a cruel act.
Second : the produce of drugs must be stopped and that’s the first thing what´s nearly impossible because with drugs you can make a lot money and so the drug production will never stop.
This means that a young brilliant boy who has very good chances to come in a famous basketball team leave his innocence because his best friends take drugs and he wanted to be cool so he also take drugs. And then he can’t leave it.
The police should more control at night in parks and in discos. In school nobody should be an outsider and when someone is bad in school everyone should help him.
In our English lessons we watched the movie “The Basketball Diaries”. This sentence means that many people lost their innocence, why they take drugs or they run amok.
They also commit crimes and prostitute them to get money for his drugs.
The birth of the autor means that he also take drugs but he survived the really difficult situation in his life.
The people in the cities should think more about this problem with drugs.
So I think it is very hard to help these people because they have nobody to speak and often nobody want to realize it that something is wrong with this person and after an amok run it is too late.
First he was not depanded on drugs but then he took more and more. Beside he always wrote a diary.
The scene with the amok run is not so good because in america a guy try this.
The film is also really hard and not for too young students because they often say fuck and use the new yorker slang.
In the older times young people stay at home with fourteen, in this time they go out and try everything and get everything in the cities.
The parents have to prevent them from drugs and doesn´t let them go out and show them the consequences.
The computer games are not always be the reason for amok runs.
In the school they teachers should show films and punish young people who take drugs.
Jim Carroll showed us how it is easy to take drugs and to destroy your life.
Maybe for some people is this movie a reason to run amok.
They are not so hard but these little soft drugs bring you to addict of them.
But I think it is very hard to help this people because many of them won’t to speak about their problems and won’t no help.
Basketball diaries was a very informative movie for me, because it is hard to understand the troubles of a young boy in a big city.
The artist had lost his innocense because he drunk very much and he had taken very much and differently drugs.
Sometimes the artists have to start with smoking or have to drink a lot and sometimes they have to eat a very much. Only that they get the film part and earn money.
No. I think that nobody change his mind because of a film.
Everyone have his own story and life in his own film and so everyone have do decide about the life.
In my opinion we can do nothing. When some people life in a good environment they never will do things like that. Only people in very bad perhaps will do this.
At first he takes only “soft drugs” like Alcohol and cigarettes. Than the situation become worse and he begins with “hard drugs” like Extasie or Heroin.
I think that the author of this movie would make teenager become afraid of taking drugs.
One reason is that only people who have no friends or play the whole day computer games like call of duty run amok.
When Leonardo di Carprio drink only anti alcoholic drinks and say often alcohol makes you brain death the young people will think about it and make it real.
I think that this film is a good example for a very bad life of a young man how doesn´t know something about the consequences of drugs.
But I think this is also a reason because everybody think that he´s so good and therefore he has problems with his life and so he doesn´t want to be this boy.
And one time it was to much.
Not everybody how take drugs died, but it can be when it´s too much.
Because everybody says that this is only a film and this happened nod to him because he only take some drugs and that’s no problem.
You can show consequences in the TV or the best I think can be when young peoplr how finished to take drugs talk with other young people about the problems.
In my opinion it also means to loose every respect and to kick the honour of living as a self-thinking human being into the ass.
Monday, 28 September 2009
HW: 3a/b
My holiday was very nice.
There was the question how I felt when come back to Raumberg.
I had absolvent my practicum in Spittal/Drau in Carinthia.
It was nice and the people were friendly. I often go out.
This evening I played very long guitar.
Later we drove at my home in St. Veit and spoke very long about this very nice evening.
At first I thought “Oh no the school begin, not yet” but later I thought its good because I see all my friends again and the “Pinsl” too.
So I went to the doctor and at 4 o’clock PM I have my appendix operated on!
After this I drove to my cousin to the south styria.
I would not be sad if the holidays would last a little bit longer.
Secondly, I want telling you some about my leisure time.
I worked under the week and sometimes on the weekends I was going out to parties.
I thought me, yes I can. I want to here and we spoke about thinks. I was very nervous. We drinked a lot of drinks, laughing and dancing, I’m very happy.
I worked there as a butler.The fire-brigade of Altaussee sold about 30000l bear, 7500 chicken 8900 sausages, 2000l wine, 6500 bottles cola and fanta and 1500 kg chips. The fire –brigade will buy a new car from this money.
School friends teachers and other pupil are staring their school live again.
This company produce plasterboards.
Beside this I do often something with my friends in Bad Aussee.
After my practical training I also worked by a very huge company called the Nemetz.
I also were two weeks in our alm.
It was on the 15th september and I was on the way to raumberg. I tried to thought about my holiday while I was driving the car.
The only thing i dont like are the Englisch homeworks:).!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Every Wednesday we bring tourists from Feld am See with a big tractor to alpine pasture. My boss and me make music for our guests.
After the four weeks I had to helped a lot at home because my dad had an accident.
There was very much work. Every morning I stand up at five o’clock because I must feed the cows and milk them two times a day.
Some works like harvest grass were weather dependent.
But there were also other works like driving with the tractor when we mowed grass for winter.
There I helped at the farm and in the wood, but I also have been going out with friend and at the football plays.
All in all my holiday was really good, but I also missed sometimes my friends of the Raumberg-school.
At the first day Andrea came to me at home.
On the evening we drove with the train to Mautern, were Andrea live.
For example we often go swimming or go out all together.
It was real fun to stand up in the morning,
The first week I made nothing, because I needed a week to relax after the hard last weeks at school. Than I made my practical training at home.
But is was for me always a highlight, when I saw our home mountain, the Bosruck, in the sun shine behind our alpine hut.
From my boss the father died
By my practise there was just one thing I didn´t like and this was that I had got to get out of bed at five o`clock am.
The school year was ending, but beginning was my practical training. I do my practical training at a farm in the area in the near of the Wechsel in Hartberg.
I was very glad when the farmer said after the meal that I can sleep for an hour.
My mother and sister organized to behind me a party.
Every weekend I drove to Weiz. Here life my sweet girlfriend Kathi. At one weekend my sister, cosine, cousin, Kathi and I drove to Vienna.
Many days I learn for they the driving license.
I enjoy the nature and when I had sawn nothing I enjoyed the sun ending.
I also went very often to some parties and to some pubs. Because I celebrate my birthday. And before the parties there are often football plays.
We harvested difficult plants. After we dry them and clean the plants.
Let us turn after Croatia-stay to the last week at home.
The family was very nice and it was always fun with them.We had a lot of things to do, for examle cleaning the house, cooking, baking, to pick cherrys and make jam and also some other things.
I went swimming to the Grundlsee and laid at the beach nearly all day long.
We were drinking some beer and it was very fun.
Therefore, at 20.09.2009 my father and I bring the corn into the silo.
The negative site on my family’s trip was that on the first day in Italy somebody battered the site window of our bmw x3 and stole the passports and the money!
The most time I do sports or do things with my family,friend or with my boyfriend.
In this time I often went swimming, met my friends and rode my motorbike.
Then I help by the harvest. The next week, I have more free time. I was swimming, went out with friends and of course, we drink too much.
We had very much to do because on a farm there is allways a work.
I also started with the course for my driving licence and then I have began to drive for the 3000 kilometre, which I had must driven before I can pass the exam.
I’m raelly sad about that Jakob and Eckehart can’t start with us, because they were also a part from our class, but I’m sure that they will manage this year.
At some fields we didn’t drove with the tractor because it’s too steep.
It was a really long time and in the first weeks I did not think that I will hold out.
In the end I would still like to say that I don’t want to miss the time by the Wilds and I thank once again for the nice time there.
The first week at home was the best. I had nothing to do, sometimes I go swimming or ride my motorbike.
Two weeks before the school begans I rode with my friends four days to Ungarn
I hoped I would pass my re-eximination but i had learned to less.
At the second part in the summer I enjoy my holiday!
And many moment later my mom come to my room and said, “stand up, you have to go to school”.
It was a really special weekend for us because it was our only weekend what we had free to drive away.
I had a lot of luck with my chef. My chef was a really good typ.
At home I life in a little city, but this here was compared with home the jungle.
I count the days there, because at the most time I work in the house and with kids, you know that isn’t the best work for me.
The other 5 weeks I was at home, I must learn maths and chemie, I hate it.
The rest of the holidays I spent at home or at my grandparents place in Lower Austria, two times we stayed in Ischl and drove swimming in to the Altauseer Lake.
After one month I got 350€ and I drove home.
There was the question how I felt when come back to Raumberg.
I had absolvent my practicum in Spittal/Drau in Carinthia.
It was nice and the people were friendly. I often go out.
This evening I played very long guitar.
Later we drove at my home in St. Veit and spoke very long about this very nice evening.
At first I thought “Oh no the school begin, not yet” but later I thought its good because I see all my friends again and the “Pinsl” too.
So I went to the doctor and at 4 o’clock PM I have my appendix operated on!
After this I drove to my cousin to the south styria.
I would not be sad if the holidays would last a little bit longer.
Secondly, I want telling you some about my leisure time.
I worked under the week and sometimes on the weekends I was going out to parties.
I thought me, yes I can. I want to here and we spoke about thinks. I was very nervous. We drinked a lot of drinks, laughing and dancing, I’m very happy.
I worked there as a butler.The fire-brigade of Altaussee sold about 30000l bear, 7500 chicken 8900 sausages, 2000l wine, 6500 bottles cola and fanta and 1500 kg chips. The fire –brigade will buy a new car from this money.
School friends teachers and other pupil are staring their school live again.
This company produce plasterboards.
Beside this I do often something with my friends in Bad Aussee.
After my practical training I also worked by a very huge company called the Nemetz.
I also were two weeks in our alm.
It was on the 15th september and I was on the way to raumberg. I tried to thought about my holiday while I was driving the car.
The only thing i dont like are the Englisch homeworks:).!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Every Wednesday we bring tourists from Feld am See with a big tractor to alpine pasture. My boss and me make music for our guests.
After the four weeks I had to helped a lot at home because my dad had an accident.
There was very much work. Every morning I stand up at five o’clock because I must feed the cows and milk them two times a day.
Some works like harvest grass were weather dependent.
But there were also other works like driving with the tractor when we mowed grass for winter.
There I helped at the farm and in the wood, but I also have been going out with friend and at the football plays.
All in all my holiday was really good, but I also missed sometimes my friends of the Raumberg-school.
At the first day Andrea came to me at home.
On the evening we drove with the train to Mautern, were Andrea live.
For example we often go swimming or go out all together.
It was real fun to stand up in the morning,
The first week I made nothing, because I needed a week to relax after the hard last weeks at school. Than I made my practical training at home.
But is was for me always a highlight, when I saw our home mountain, the Bosruck, in the sun shine behind our alpine hut.
From my boss the father died
By my practise there was just one thing I didn´t like and this was that I had got to get out of bed at five o`clock am.
The school year was ending, but beginning was my practical training. I do my practical training at a farm in the area in the near of the Wechsel in Hartberg.
I was very glad when the farmer said after the meal that I can sleep for an hour.
My mother and sister organized to behind me a party.
Every weekend I drove to Weiz. Here life my sweet girlfriend Kathi. At one weekend my sister, cosine, cousin, Kathi and I drove to Vienna.
Many days I learn for they the driving license.
I enjoy the nature and when I had sawn nothing I enjoyed the sun ending.
I also went very often to some parties and to some pubs. Because I celebrate my birthday. And before the parties there are often football plays.
We harvested difficult plants. After we dry them and clean the plants.
Let us turn after Croatia-stay to the last week at home.
The family was very nice and it was always fun with them.We had a lot of things to do, for examle cleaning the house, cooking, baking, to pick cherrys and make jam and also some other things.
I went swimming to the Grundlsee and laid at the beach nearly all day long.
We were drinking some beer and it was very fun.
Therefore, at 20.09.2009 my father and I bring the corn into the silo.
The negative site on my family’s trip was that on the first day in Italy somebody battered the site window of our bmw x3 and stole the passports and the money!
The most time I do sports or do things with my family,friend or with my boyfriend.
In this time I often went swimming, met my friends and rode my motorbike.
Then I help by the harvest. The next week, I have more free time. I was swimming, went out with friends and of course, we drink too much.
We had very much to do because on a farm there is allways a work.
I also started with the course for my driving licence and then I have began to drive for the 3000 kilometre, which I had must driven before I can pass the exam.
I’m raelly sad about that Jakob and Eckehart can’t start with us, because they were also a part from our class, but I’m sure that they will manage this year.
At some fields we didn’t drove with the tractor because it’s too steep.
It was a really long time and in the first weeks I did not think that I will hold out.
In the end I would still like to say that I don’t want to miss the time by the Wilds and I thank once again for the nice time there.
The first week at home was the best. I had nothing to do, sometimes I go swimming or ride my motorbike.
Two weeks before the school begans I rode with my friends four days to Ungarn
I hoped I would pass my re-eximination but i had learned to less.
At the second part in the summer I enjoy my holiday!
And many moment later my mom come to my room and said, “stand up, you have to go to school”.
It was a really special weekend for us because it was our only weekend what we had free to drive away.
I had a lot of luck with my chef. My chef was a really good typ.
At home I life in a little city, but this here was compared with home the jungle.
I count the days there, because at the most time I work in the house and with kids, you know that isn’t the best work for me.
The other 5 weeks I was at home, I must learn maths and chemie, I hate it.
The rest of the holidays I spent at home or at my grandparents place in Lower Austria, two times we stayed in Ischl and drove swimming in to the Altauseer Lake.
After one month I got 350€ and I drove home.
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